A short little comic I made for a request

"If you're wondering why this is here, its because I wanted to share and two, the Main two characters are Mario and Meggy with a main goal of this being to rebuild their friendship due to it being kind of wreck around for a while (Mario Abuse, stuff like that)

The Mafia Arc is a idea for WOTFI 2025 where Marty, seeking a human body, breaks out Mr. Puzzles to help him with his revenge on the SMG4 crew with him offering to bring back Leggy to the world of the living if he help him. This results in Mario and Meggy getting kidnap (flashbacks and talk of pervious trauma) and their DNA taken to clone both Leggy and Marty's human form before sending them deep below in the faculty. After this Marty wins the election for Mayor and makes the SMG4 crew outlaws, forcing them on the run until they are two captured and taken to the faculty. WOTFI happens and at the end, The SMG4 crew escapes, Mr. Puzzles is redeemed (more Neutral) after Marty betrays him and tries to kill him and Leggy and finally, Mario and Meggy kill Marty, ending him for good (and Mario possibly getting a redesign who knows)

I got the story structure set up. It shall be around 10 episodes split into 5 for two "story chapters" then the trailer for WOTFI 2025 follow by that itself as its conclusion.

I started to write the first episode but could use some help with actual episode names and even with the writing cause I definably know there are much better writers out their.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/15R-c6SKdFO8Lzfp_asz_PoHHUn-HDl6T8lHb5R8iWXQ/edit?usp=sharing

Feel free to comment on it and leave advice to help me write this and maybe one day one of the SMG4 higher ups like Medi sees this (No hateful comments please).

Also If anyone could draw concept art for this it would be very helpful like Marty's human form.

Ultra Instinct Mario is a trilogy MXM story AU I been thinking of for a while now and I kind of want to write it out (and later animated it into its own films) but I'm not sure if anyone would actually read it.

So my question is, will anyone here actually read the story? Tell me please and maybe I'll write it