r/AlanWake • u/gallaxo Herald of Darkness • Mar 04 '24
Why doesn't he write a happy ending, is he stupid ? General
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u/Avijel Mar 04 '24
From what I remember from the first Alan Wake, Thomas Zane tried to have only happy endings and that went really wrong as dark place was twisting it (but I might miss remember, aka it's time to reply first game again). You need balance
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u/scarypiano Park Ranger Mar 04 '24
Nope, you're right. Like, the entirety of the first game established that writing someone back to life went wrong because there were no proper stakes. That he broke a fundamental rule.
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u/CaptainRaz Parautilitarian Mar 04 '24
He still could write anything other than Horror. Why not some light fantasy adventure? Or cozy romance? Philosophical journey like "Sophie's choice" or something like that. Even poems and uplifting music work great.
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u/scarypiano Park Ranger Mar 04 '24 edited Mar 04 '24
Because, he said in the game that the Dark Presence responded more to horror and darkness. He said in one of his videos that the Dark Place would twist his words to make things darker, so he had to just go along with it. Additionally, he couldn't just rewrite Return into something lighthearted; he had to stick with the genre and work with it. He tried writing action in American Nightmare and it didn't work. He's probably tried a happy ending many times. Also, as somebody else said, he has to believe in his writing. It doesn't work if he- even subconsciously- isn't confident with his writing.
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u/DrClutch117 Mar 05 '24
I think this is the main point. HE has to believe in it, and unfortunately he has very high standards for himself. If he feels like he is cutting corners to get a good ending it won’t work.
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Mar 04 '24
Imagine if Alan wrote romances and instead of a survival horror the game was a dating sim
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Mar 04 '24
Imagine what the dark place would do if Alan was an acclaimed writer of lighthearted pulp erotica so he wouldn’t have been bound by the rules of horror in the first place.
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u/gallaxo Herald of Darkness Mar 04 '24
Tbh the worst situation would have been where he was a horror/science-fiction writer. Imagine aliens popping out of nowhere
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u/i__hate__stairs Mar 04 '24 edited Mar 05 '24
The ending of the 15 minute tech demo Remedy released a long time ago has me wondering about it tbh (although I'm aware that they've stated specifically it was a tech/gameplay demo and not to take any of those story beats seriously). Alan Wake looking up and the camera panning back as he's tractor-beamed into a giant flying sauser looked cool af.
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u/CaptainRaz Parautilitarian Mar 04 '24
Wait what? Is that available somewhere?
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u/Kentuza Mar 04 '24
I don't think that would change much since he's not a horror writer to begin with
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u/dmanny64 Mar 05 '24
RomCom writers in Bright Falls just having a wild but wonderful vacation and going home with their relationships stronger than ever
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Mar 04 '24
I have a theory about this, it is a good question, why can't he write what he wants, he says that it is hard to make fiction come true, so I think it is because Alan Wake is ultimately connected to our universe and it has to be a good story to exist, otherwise game wouldn't sell and Sam wouldn't write. It is very meta I know, if he just said "and Alan escaped" there wouldn't be a story and no reason for the game to exist.
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u/ExternalOpen372 Mar 05 '24
Tbh i think the meta jokes should be about Remedy wants to sell sequel/makes franchise because they could put happy ending in Aw 1 and done without touching the IP again
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u/CaptainRaz Parautilitarian Mar 04 '24
That does make a lot of sense and I can certainly see Remedy breaking the forth wall big time eventually, maybe using some VR/AR tech or something we still don't have. Could be part of Control 3 or something still far away like that.
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u/GreatCrimsonDragon Mar 04 '24
Based on how the Dark Place affects works of art, you have to stay in genre. The books in game are horror stories, which need to be full of dread. You can't just slap a happy ending to the end of a horror and be satisfying.
That satisfaction is important to the Dark Place. Alan spent all those years trying to write himself out, but the story wouldn't take. It wasn't a proper way to write a horror story.
It's the same reason the Anderson Brothers need to perform as the Old Gods of Asgard toward the end of the game. They only have power as rock musicians, and can only perform rituals as such.
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u/CaptainRaz Parautilitarian Mar 04 '24
But there's no need to be in the horror genre, at least no reason 'in universe'. The musical act isn't horror, for example. The poems and children puzzles we see work the magic aren't all horror either.
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u/GreatCrimsonDragon Mar 05 '24
The poems and children puzzles are staples of horror, though. As for the musical act, it's more a staple of horror comedies to do full music numbers. It could also be a convention to break up the dread as to not wear the reader/viewer out.
As for why horror, my understanding is that Alan being a writer means he can directly do whatever the Dark Place wants. The Dark Prescence actively corrupts any works for it's own purposes.
In the first game, Alan isn't a horror author. He's a crime thriller author. Hence why the first game has those elements, albeit adding supernatural moments.
AW2 is survival horror because, well, what would any author be writing after, what, 13 years in total isolation aside from probably Satan himself tormenting you?
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u/WillyGoat2000 Mar 05 '24
I agree in large part to what you're saying.
I will say though that between the Dark Presence influencing Alan's stories (he was forced to write Departure, he was edited heavily for Initiation and Return) I have always seen a lot of the darkness coming from both the Dark Presence 'infecting' the story as well as Alan's state of mind. So even if he started as an Erotic Star Trek Furry Fanfiction Author, darkness would've crept into the story.
I don't fully agree that the all of the nursery rhymes are innately dark and horror filled though - some truly are, but like there is one about a man without kids who raises a fawn, and the one about drowning is intentionally about NOT drowning. But IMO, the fact that they're open to interpretation is what created the danger, as it 'broke the rules' and let the Dark Presence kind of make up or influence the fiction directly.
From AWAN, it describes the power of the written work, and the dangers of implication:
To change the world, you must craft a blueprint for the new reality. Any work of art will do, as long as it's a genuine act of creation; that's what the energies of the Dark Place respond to. The results may be subtle and perplexing, or far-ranging and momentous.
My area of expertise -- the written word -- gives much more precise results than music or interpretive dance would, for instance.
But words can be extremely dangerous. What you define may become reality, but so can that which you imply... Even if you don't realize you're doing so.
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u/Electrical_Trifle_76 Mar 04 '24
Cause it doesn’t fit the rules of the narrative. But also apparently the narrative doesn’t matter and he could just do that, at least according to Door. It’s like he’s making up arbitrary rules he needs to follow I think
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u/gallaxo Herald of Darkness Mar 04 '24
I mean we're not a 100% sure that there are in fact no rule. There definitely are a few that are just Alan making stuff up. But it possible that there still are a few that arr actual rule. Do I make sense ? I feel like I am not very clear (english isn't my main language)
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u/Gundamfan1999 Mar 04 '24
I believe in first game it's alluded to that any narrative he Writes has to be water tight or the "darkness" can make use of any "plot holes' so in a sense he is bound to a rule of anything works as long as it could realistically happen.
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u/CaptainRaz Parautilitarian Mar 04 '24
I honest think this is the overall message the story is telling us in the bigger arch
It's about Alan learning to believe in himself, killing his own self-doubt (that before just had the form of his writer's block and other personality troubles), and overcoming the limitations he creates for himself.
Not unsurprisingly, the villain since Barbara was defeated in AW1 is just himself, in the form of "scratch", which could be just his own big ego.
It also wasn't surprising how quickly Saga managed to overcome the dark place on her own and get out (I mean, I'm not absolutely sure she got out, but seems to have gotten out). She isn't swallowing in self doubt and self hatred (very possibly Alan himself wrote her that way). The entire dark place isn't even as dark for her. It's much more greyish.
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u/Baldurien Mar 05 '24
Telling Alan to write himself a happy ending is the metaphorical equivalent of asking someone with depression not to be sad
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u/Educational-Oven15 Mar 04 '24
The problem is that's not his style
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u/CaptainRaz Parautilitarian Mar 04 '24
His style is actually light cheesy cop stuff, that people read in airports in one go...
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u/Mysterious-Mixture58 Mar 05 '24
I like to think the dark presence slaps the shit out of him when he does that
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u/Peatore Mar 05 '24
Door's annoyance with Wake over the "rules" is interesting to me.
Door doesn't understand the rules because he isn't restricted in the sawe way Wake is.
He's above them, so he can't understand them.
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u/TheAlmightyJanitor Mar 05 '24
I know this is a joke but people will genuinely ask this shit when it is outright explained why he can't.
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u/Frkn385 Mar 05 '24
It's a horror story, I have to fit the genre. The ending has to be dark.
- WAKE, every 10 minutes
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u/Spiritual-Land-9601 Mar 05 '24
That’s what everybody wonders, but Alan would just say “It doesn’t work like that, if it was that simple don’t you think I’d done it already???”🤣🤷🏽♂️
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u/wildwolf7525 Mar 06 '24
I never ask this to myself or even thought about it, if anyone played the game and paid attention to they would know the answer as to why he can’t lol
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u/gonzohaze13 Mar 05 '24
The same way we cannot write a happy ending for ourselves in real life. We work at the ending we deserve. The ending that works best for ourselves.
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u/gallaxo Herald of Darkness Mar 05 '24
Huh okay ? I feel like many people think I am asking for an explanation. (This os not a critic, I am just trying to understand) Does my post make you think I want someone to explain why he can't ?
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Mar 05 '24
This argument is so stupid I automatically thought it was a shit post when I saw it due to how many people are saying it. Did you even see play the game?
edit: i just saw your reply…..
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u/gallaxo Herald of Darkness Mar 05 '24
Yeah it's a shitpost ahah. I can't believe how many people comment to say how stupid I am without even reading the first comment
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Mar 05 '24
A lot of people, me included, don’t read the first comment i guess. But tbh this was such a good shit post that i just didn’t really feel the need to read it. Also my first reaction was that it was indeed a shit post while the rest of my comment was to make up for the case where the alternative was true. Of course I am very gullible and as soon as i saw the first large comment i assumed “oh okay guess it wasn’t a shit post” and just kept writing. I couldn’t see your reply due to the length of the comment you were replying to. I apologize for questioning whether you played the game or not or insinuating that you were dumb. I’m dumb af and that’s why this happened, hence why i edited my reply, have a good one 🤡< —- how i feel rn.
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u/gallaxo Herald of Darkness Mar 05 '24
No no it's okay you don't have to apologize. I guess that if that many people thought I was genuine, it's my fault. I mean the title wasn't very helpful ahah
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Mar 05 '24
Gotta admit the title was the least shit post esque, making me question it. But I’m not apologizing entirely out of forgiveness or shame, it’s out of humility as well. If i didn’t feel the need to apologize i wouldn’t have felt guilt or forgiveness, and then there’d be no need to apologize. There is never a scenario where an apology is unnecessary i think.
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Mar 05 '24
Many people agreeing on one thing doesn’t make you wrong, or them objectively right, rather it’s a subjective collective. We can’t put ourselves in your shoes and as such we cannot blame you. Not that i feel there is anything to blame here…..
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u/CrunchyRaisins Mar 05 '24
An explanation I heard that I liked was that Alan couldn't just write it that way and get out. The standards he holds for his stuff, and the genres he writes in, makes it so he needs to feel like it fits. I kinda like this explanation because it leans more into the Dark Place being all your worst qualities reflected back at you, so self imposed limitations keep you there.
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u/bryceallen1 Mar 06 '24
I don't think it was in a cinematic, but somewhere I remember Alan saying that he tried to write in things to use or happy endings and it just didn't do anything at all. like he knows hes out of bounds when nothing changes. maybe im mistaken. Someone who knows the details better can confirm?
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u/dorkspectre Champion of Light Mar 09 '24
What if he wanted to write a happy ending, but Scratch took over and rewrote it? Or the Dark Presence sensed what he was doing and made him stop. We get a show of this during AWAN when Mr. Scratch is first defeated.
How many pages did he write for 13 years?
Alan's lost memories, his ideas eaten, he even swallowed his own words, and his manuscripts float to the surface of a lake. Within those pages, how many attempts had Alan typed for a happy ending? We aren't shown, and Alan doesn't remember, but what he's done before hadn't worked.
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u/MrDarkjeda Mar 05 '24
He is writing based on the limits established in AW1. He needs to work based on the Dark Place/ Scratch
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u/Wataru2001 Mar 05 '24
He says it over and over. It has to fit. Otherwise it won't work. I take this as it's literally against his nature to write something that doesn't fit his narrative. Since he's a horror writer and a slave to his own story he's not really in control.
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u/patrickbateman2004 Hypercaffeinated Mar 08 '24
Alan likes to torture himself, it is a huge plotpoint that he self sabotages for the sake of his own masochistic pleasure. He writes people into his kink pretending he is a hero
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u/hellohowdyworld Mar 04 '24
I was thinking about this and maybe Alan has a really hard time because all his writing is clairvoyant, so he’s like the perfect victim of the dark place. All his art already so close to reality
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u/ThrasherX9 Mar 04 '24
I see the argument a lot, even in Honest Trailers, why doesn't he just write himself a tank or this and that - and I mean, he like explains why he can't just do that, that the story has to make sense and mean something. He also has to "play with Scratch" as it were by writing on his terms as well, being a horror story. Basically there are rules that Wake as to follow or it wont work; or so he says. Hero's sacrifice and all that jazz.
Your post may be tongue in cheek though in which case... never mind?